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Post by Severus Tue Jan 29, 2013 12:42 am

current:

Working on my brushing skills, so everything but the render and text is me using the brush tool. Also tried to keep flow reasonable.

Sev's C&C thread Yes_zps849fd91d

old ones:
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Post by Blazer Tue Jan 29, 2013 12:53 am

That's actually pretty sweet. His clothes do tend to blend in with the background but it's still a good idea. The name kinda sticks out from it..could just be me though lol.
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Post by Severus Tue Jan 29, 2013 10:58 pm

Blazer wrote:That's actually pretty sweet. His clothes do tend to blend in with the background but it's still a good idea. The name kinda sticks out from it..could just be me though lol.

yeah text really isn't my strong suit
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Post by Severus Sun Feb 03, 2013 3:47 am

double post for update

newest one Smile
this is me trying to use a disintegration like effect
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Post by MrYoSo901 Sun Feb 03, 2013 5:21 am

Severus wrote:current:
tried using my Disintegration effect.
Sev's C&C thread Try2_zps395d5a27

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awesome effects
crappy text
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Post by Severus Sun Feb 03, 2013 4:38 pm

MrYoSo901 wrote:
awesome effects
crappy text

what would you suggest to do?
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Post by Safko Sun Feb 03, 2013 4:51 pm

You could try removing the text as a whole. It's better to have a textless tag than have the text ruin it n.n
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Post by Blazer Sun Feb 03, 2013 5:53 pm

Severus wrote:
MrYoSo901 wrote:
awesome effects
crappy text

what would you suggest to do?

Consult your fellow members or viceroys! Very Happy
Or have someone else play around with text if you want it that bad. Then they can explain what they did if you like it ^.^

I think changing the transparency, adding the desintegration effect, and changing the style of the text (not necessarily font) might help make it blend.
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Post by MrYoSo901 Sun Feb 03, 2013 6:21 pm



this
Safko wrote:You could try removing the text as a whole. It's better to have a textless tag than have the text ruin it n.n

or choose a less eye catching font and apply the effect that you did on the render...
Sev's C&C thread Lightning_mage_signature_by_radillacviii-d3407na


don't really know i've had trouble with texts too.
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Post by Severus Mon Feb 04, 2013 1:01 am

MrYoSo901 wrote:

this
Safko wrote:You could try removing the text as a whole. It's better to have a textless tag than have the text ruin it n.n

or choose a less eye catching font and apply the effect that you did on the render...
don't really know i've had trouble with texts too.

here is my attempt
Sev's C&C thread Try3TEXT_zps8da3547e

without text
Sev's C&C thread RedguyNOTEXT_zps9001036e
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Post by Blazer Mon Feb 04, 2013 3:52 am

The text looks blotchy imo. Perhaps have the disintegration effect be angled the same as the character?
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Post by Severus Sun Feb 10, 2013 1:32 am

update with new sigs

#1
Sev's C&C thread Png1try2_zps10506d47
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Post by Blazer Sun Feb 10, 2013 4:58 am

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9e-ZM-NXKOU

They look very nice!
2 and 3 are my favorite
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Post by Crazy Potato Sun Feb 10, 2013 11:42 am

3 is the best. Those eyes pop out at you and the way is looks seems great to me.
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Post by MrYoSo901 Sun Feb 10, 2013 11:45 am

Severus wrote:update with new sigs

#1
Sev's C&C thread Png1try2_zps10506d47
#2
Sev's C&C thread Tryjpg1_zps25b0611f
#3
Sev's C&C thread Png1_zps58e1ce33


yep definitely 3. The shape is a little bit awkward though.
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Post by Severus Sun Feb 10, 2013 1:22 pm

MrYoSo901 wrote:
Severus wrote:update with new sigs

#3
Sev's C&C thread Png1_zps58e1ce33


yep definitely 3. The shape is a little bit awkward though.

mind saying how so?
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Post by MrYoSo901 Sun Feb 10, 2013 1:45 pm

Severus wrote:
MrYoSo901 wrote:
Severus wrote:update with new sigs

#3
Sev's C&C thread Png1_zps58e1ce33


yep definitely 3. The shape is a little bit awkward though.

mind saying how so?

width too small, height too tall compared to normal sigs. It actually looks like a thumbnail of a wallpaper or something.
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Post by Safko Sun Feb 10, 2013 1:48 pm

Kind of clustered but it looks good (:
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Post by Severus Sun Feb 10, 2013 1:59 pm

MrYoSo901 wrote:
Severus wrote:
MrYoSo901 wrote:
Severus wrote:update with new sigs

#3
Sev's C&C thread Png1_zps58e1ce33


yep definitely 3. The shape is a little bit awkward though.

mind saying how so?

width too small, height too tall compared to normal sigs. It actually looks like a thumbnail of a wallpaper or something.

Ahh ok, ill keep that in mind next time.

Safko wrote:Kind of clustered but it looks good (:

thanks!
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Post by Blazer Sun Feb 10, 2013 6:26 pm

The bottom right symbol is what I see as trippy lol. But yeah, still great works.
I really like the style you've been using lately too. It's very cool.
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Post by Severus Tue Feb 26, 2013 2:40 am

working in proportions that strict sites make people stay in. just to test myself in working in a small area.
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Post by +RoRo Wed Feb 27, 2013 1:12 am

Try working on flow and depth. Make the fractals, c4d's and other vectors go in the same direction as the render itself. As for depth, sharpen the focal and blur appropriate areas in the background Smile

Hope this CnC was helpful!
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Post by MrYoSo901 Wed Feb 27, 2013 1:44 am

+RoRo wrote:Try working on flow and depth. Make the fractals, c4d's and other vectors go in the same direction as the render itself. As for depth, sharpen the focal and blur appropriate areas in the background Smile

Hope this CnC was helpful!


this.

the flow was intersecting all over the place. that and theres a green bar thingy on the right side thats a bit distracting.
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Post by Severus Sat Mar 02, 2013 4:04 am

New One,

Working on my brushing skills, so everything but the render and text is me using the brush tool. Also tried to keep flow reasonable.

Sev's C&C thread Yes_zps849fd91d

^I'm actually kinda proud of this one, i really like how it turned out.
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Post by Deathfire123 Sat Mar 02, 2013 5:48 am

Severus wrote:New One,

Working on my brushing skills, so everything but the render and text is me using the brush tool. Also tried to keep flow reasonable.

Sev's C&C thread Yes_zps849fd91d

^I'm actually kinda proud of this one, i really like how it turned out.

Love the render and effects. Text is a bit too bold, but other than that I like it. Maybe make it a few sizes smaller, that would be my only suggestion
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